Initial ideas for the Thriller

Here is a detailed summary of what we have decided to do for our thriller opening:

Scene 1(Two people):
It starts off with a black screen, camera pressed against cushion.
(First person) "Check this out, new camera for the trip"
Camera comes up slowly and does a pan, to show a room filled with bags.
(Second person) "Yer its looks cool, Hey over here...''
Camera pans over to the person.
(Second Person) "HELLLO"
(Second person) ''What's the quality like?"
(First Person) "I dunno, lets take a look"

Scene 2(Four People):
Camera just shows black screen, the in-between recordings on tape.
It then cuts to being in a car, same person holding the camera, The passenger holding the camera would either be in the front steat (turning back at passengers in the back to talk) or in the back showing the driver, the front seat passenger talking and showing the view towards where they were going.
(First Person) "hey (characters name) hows (Drivers name)'s Driving *dirty chuckle*"
(Second Person) "yeh not bad i suppose, kind of like my gran... *laugh*"
(First Person) *Pans around the car showing some passengers asleep and the luggage in the car* See what goodies we have here? *laugh* as you can see we have slightly over packed for a few nights Don't ya think?"

Scene 3
~Camera Cuts out and shows the black screen for a second with the sound of a winding on tape~
(first Person) "Ahh... we have finally arrived.. in good timing too, still enough day light for you guys to set up camp *chuckles to himself*
(second person) "Christ (first persons name) why don't you put down that camera and come help us.?. this was your idea after all.."
(first person) "I'm documenting.. other wise i would help"
(third Person) "No your slacking. put down the camera and help us you lazy bugger"

Scene 4
~the screen will go black again and suddenly cut in once its turned to night with each character sat around a fire, telling stories and cooking food~
(third person) [Part way through telling a Ghost Story] {in a low deep voice} "and as the woman stepped through the door... she felt a cold shiver pass down her neck onto her back.. she turned round and !!!SHOUTS BANG!!!"
~Every one Except Person 3 Screams~
(person four) "Damn (person 3) why.. we ain't going to be able to sleep tonight.."
(person two) "I'm just going to the loo for a sec Be Right Back, don't start the next one without me .."

Scene 5
~a few minuets pass and though Person 4 is telling a Story Person 2 has some important news~
(person 2) {Whispers} "Guys... Psst Guys"
(Rest of group) "what up?"
(person 2) "guys i swear i just saw some guy on that other Field dragging a guy.. i swear down!"

scene 6
~the screen goes black again as the group starts to get up and move towards the Fence joining the Fields~
{As they start to get close the camera will cut back in showing them sneaking up to the fence whispering all their speech}
(person 2) "See i knew it ! i F****** knew it, what is that !?"
(person 1) "yeh.. guys i think we should go.. this don't feel right.."
(person 3) "why? is your Spidy Sense tingling?.."
(person 1) "no I'm just not up for finding out how this ends."#
~All of a sudden there is a quick flash of light and a Loud gun shot, The group turns into chaos and the Unknown man hears and See's this and puts on a chase~

From this point on there is very little speech just shouting for help and occasional cut outs as the camera gets knocked about while everyone
runs. mostof the sounds for this will be Non-Diagetic due to it being shot mainly "POV" this will enchance the Ambiant sound and create tension & Suspence there will be some Diagetic sounds like a Deep sound track at times to add Suspence and Also the gunshot would have to be added in.

Written By:
George Marino,
Sassie Risino